Went to work, Never came back.
Task 1 ( 1a - iv )
"I cant believe i woke up late again!" Tom screamed.
It was the day when Tom was suppose to go for my job interview.
This job interview was his dream since he was young.
He often mentioned that if he did not get the job, he would do something.
Tom woke up with a shock.
As quick as a lightning he dash across the rooms to reach the toilet.
He quickly washed up and changed into my clothes.
Tom simply grabbed a bread and stuffed it into my mouth as he was extremely hungry.
As he began boarding the bus, Tom started to think how does my boss looks like.
Being nervous, he nearly vomitted out the bread i ate.
Tom could easily feel butterflies in my stomach.
Unfortunately he was caught up in a major traffic jam.
He was pacing up and down the bus without fail.
The people around him began to get irritated and scolded him.
Being furious and frustrated, he began to argue with a group of people.
Suddenly, Tom felt a heavy blow on his head.
A young man punched him for being unreasonable.
Despite bleeding a little in his head.
Tom alighted from the bus as it reached his distination.
Tom used tissue to prevent the blood from flowing.
As Tom reached the interview room, he was glad that his boss had a good impression of him.
Not long, Tom was accepted after the interview.
However he was asked to work immediately.
Feeling excited and elated after having his dream job,
he began to work.
Ignoring the injury he had on his head.
Few hours later when Tom went to the toilet.
He fainted.
Soon he was sent to the hospital and had an emergency operation.
Tom had died due to a slightly cracked skull at his head.
Tom's family members was devastated.
However they knew that they could not bring their beloved Tom back alive.
"I cant believe i woke up late again!" Tom screamed.
It was the day when Tom was suppose to go for my job interview.
This job interview was his dream since he was young.
He often mentioned that if he did not get the job, he would do something.
Tom woke up with a shock.
As quick as a lightning he dash across the rooms to reach the toilet.
He quickly washed up and changed into my clothes.
Tom simply grabbed a bread and stuffed it into my mouth as he was extremely hungry.
As he began boarding the bus, Tom started to think how does my boss looks like.
Being nervous, he nearly vomitted out the bread i ate.
Tom could easily feel butterflies in my stomach.
Unfortunately he was caught up in a major traffic jam.
He was pacing up and down the bus without fail.
The people around him began to get irritated and scolded him.
Being furious and frustrated, he began to argue with a group of people.
Suddenly, Tom felt a heavy blow on his head.
A young man punched him for being unreasonable.
Despite bleeding a little in his head.
Tom alighted from the bus as it reached his distination.
Tom used tissue to prevent the blood from flowing.
As Tom reached the interview room, he was glad that his boss had a good impression of him.
Not long, Tom was accepted after the interview.
However he was asked to work immediately.
Feeling excited and elated after having his dream job,
he began to work.
Ignoring the injury he had on his head.
Few hours later when Tom went to the toilet.
He fainted.
Soon he was sent to the hospital and had an emergency operation.
Tom had died due to a slightly cracked skull at his head.
Tom's family members was devastated.
However they knew that they could not bring their beloved Tom back alive.

1 Comments:
At June 18, 2009 at 1:52 AM ,
Anonymous said...
Are you paragraphing every sentence?
Interesting plot! Your language is generally ok with only a few errors here and there. Some odd sentence structure when it comes to writing Tom's thoughts though. We can work on that when school reopens.
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